Day #9

This is a part of a mini-series of independent posts, starting here

Thought i’d try a couple haikus after what feels like ages!

Heavy with dew
Fresh with a purpose
The sun rains a storm

Star-lit moon eyes
Dotted birds of metal
Hovering clouds


Haiku Vol. 2

This is my second attempt at writing these little haikus. Constructive criticism from last time helped a lot, hope there’s more where that came from!

I wrote the final two with a sort of peaceful mindset that somehow brought up memories of good ol’ rainy days when school would be off, or when it wasn’t time consuming to stop and smell a rose or two.


“Can I go play now?”
“Don’t forget your knee caps;
And your gas mask”

(A little “environmental commentary”, if you will! 🙂 )


Cup in hand
Kettle on the stove
The skies pour


Daffodils sway
Windswept fields
A silent noise


Thank You.


I came across a beautiful form of poetry I didn’t know of before. Thought I’d give it a couple of shots.

I am a novice at this, suggestions are most welcome and most appreciated! 🙂


Look into her eyes
I Search for a future
But see the past


The smell of rice
Imagined as if were true
My stomach bellows


Near the deep end
Of a river too fast
Feet slip away


Ant crawls
Grain of sugar on its back
The fit survive


Thank you.